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  Act 1: The Setup & Inciting Incident (The Loop Begins) Setup:  Phil is established as narcissistic, arrogant, and miserable, disliking his job and colleagues. Set up: Steve Is a self loathing, war vet in therapy for PTSD. He refuses to answer the call to help others because of his stinging fear of inadequacy due to crippling regrets and past failure as a leader. Inciting Incident:  Phil arrives in Punxsutawney, experiences the "perfect" day for reporting, but is trapped in a blizzard. Inciting Incident: The water pipes burst in Maya's Yoga studio overnight. While she is due to lead a group of yogis on a Mexico retreat the very next day, she has to stay and deal. So she calls her brother Steve at the airport with a surprise plan.  Plot Point 1 (Lock-in):  Phil wakes up again on Feb 2nd at 6:00 AM. He realizes he is trapped,, breaking the, linear, narrative.   The Artifice  +4 Plot point 1 (Lock -in): Thinking he will be a participant at his sister...

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